❶ 我的一份自薦信,哪位高手給我翻譯成英文下面是金山快譯自動翻譯的,可能不太好,但能參考參考.
^Personal Recommendation
Dear sir,
Please allow me to recommend myself sincerely. My name is ^^^. I was born in a small village in central China. I'm 25 years old. I hold a bachlor's degree in Chinese Medicine and have been working for 6 years for the rural health system.
So young and so energetic as I am, I hope to know more about the history and culture of the other countries, to discover about the wonderful world, and also to make a contribution to the development of the society. The JET program of your country interests me so much. I am looking forward to take chance of this opportunity.
I shall express my advantages and shortcomings as follow. I don't understand Japanese and my English is not so good. This is the 2 biggest cons for me to have this job. But to speak of the cons, firstly I am such a type of person that is determined to keep pursuing with endeaver what I treasure and value. I will cherish this invaluable overseas working experience shall I get it. Secondly, I have an indepth view about the current cultural and social situations of my home country, I always follow the national and international news on economics, politics, science and technology, and furthermore I am pleasant to accept new things and renew my knowledge resovoir.
I hope you can give me this opportunity. And in return I won't spare a single effort to promote the Sino-Japan collaboration and cultural exchange.
Yours sincerely,
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2006 11 28
❷ 英語自薦信1
以下意見僅供參考，謝謝！
1.democracy是名詞不可以做定語，可以改成「名主的」形容詞：democratic
2.She give me a lot of freedom 那個要加S
3.falsity用法不對，一般是虛偽的意思，要寫「錯誤」可以用：fault
4. My dad is a knowledgeable man who can answer my questions mostly and always take interesting examinations with me.這句的TAKE要加S。
5.Because of them，聽起來不爽，不如改成「Thanks to them」
6. this time they both agree with me to apply ASSIST ,這句把前面改成「both of them」比they both 要好
7.Without them, I cannot be so confident that I want to be an exchange student in America alone.這句話應該拆成兩句說比較容易讓人看懂：without them, I would notbe so confident. I want to be an exchange student in America alone.
8.but at school I change a lot.可以說：but school life changes me a lot.
9. I have a good health since I』m child because of lots of exercise with my father and I』m good at football which I』ve been playing more than 8 years. 這句同樣太長了，要拆開：I am in good health since I was a child, because I do lots of exercises with my father. I am good at football as well, which I have been playing for more than 8 years.
10.Even I got an silver medal with the shot match in middle school.
你是要說「我在中學甚至得過短跑銀牌」？那你可以說：Once in middle school, I have got a silver medal in a short distance race.銀牌用A不用AN。
11.both in last school and now你是說：「在我以前的學校和現在學校」么？那你可以說：both in my former and present school。
12.plans to take part in a body mechanics 你不可以用PLANS要用PLAN
13.Not only sport but also art is my interest。這句也有問題，你可以說：I am interested not only in sport but also in art.
14.The dance named the Persian Cat 不必說的這么復雜，《波斯貓》可以做同位語，就說：The dance Persian Cat就OK了
15.got the first wards 請問WARDS是不是寫錯字了啊？一等獎是the first award或者the first prize.
我盡力了。、你看著辦吧